高三英语写作 《第一次尝试》

高三英语写作 《第一次尝试》

小组:孙靖,庄安迪,何凯悦,何清扬,何绮琪,余雅莹)

  Nowadays, a public debate is over the two propaganda videos between the Yale and the s  Peking University. Both of the videos differ in their own style. Some hold the opinion that Peking University, full of cultural and historical spots, can stand for Chinese traditional characteristic, while others think that Yale focuses on the practical personal development, which was highly considered by the entire world. What’s more, the diversity of activities and concentration on academic research can be easily found in Yale’s video. As a result, our team is in favor of the vivid and energetic one Yale.

(小组:陈颖诗,欧阳捷赛,苗乐欣,段毅雯,胥)

Nowadays, there are two totally different international university videos on the internet. One of the videos is from PKU, showing more about Chinese traditional culture through the sightseeing of the university. The other video is Yale’s, introducing the student’s colorful and vivid school life by a special means – musical performance. Some people consider that PKU’s   video is better while other people have the idea that Yale’s is wonderful. In our opinion, Yale’s video is more attractive to young students because it not only cares about the communication and co-operation among students but also inspires students to follow their dreams.

 

《第一次尝试》

英语老师播放两个视频,同学们观看完视频之后分小组讨论,对两个视频进行比较分析,由组长执笔,副组长主持讨论,并最终将小组成员意见汇总,写成5句话小作文。

大家所看视频是耶鲁大学以及北京大学两个名校的校园宣传片,两个视频都曾在网络上引起广泛热议,热情亲切的耶鲁校园风格以及悠远宁静的北大校园风光都各有千秋,大家观看完视频之后立即进行分组讨论,各抒己见,将所想表达的中文意见翻译成英文并浓缩成5句话,每个小组都以最快速度完成写作,且写作质量都相当符合Miss Rose的标准,语言流畅且简洁优美,意见明确格式清晰,书写也挺工整。

第一次尝试用这种方式来写英文小作文,播放视频即兴写作的确有助于激发学生的写作兴趣,生动的课堂也需要多元化的媒体协助,希翼以后的作文课都可以有机会接触365bet体育官网的有趣事物。

(报道:高三16班)

Rose 追记

不知是否领导认为我特别powerful,还是认为我水平还欠一点,过去若干年我一直任教高三的理科班。今年意外地接了个文科班。接触后,又意外地发现本届文科班的小朋友的外语基础尤其是写作方面要比往年的好。于是本人如何让这些高材生们不要陷入“低水平的重复”而苦思冥想。

上述提到的《第一次》也是我在二中数十年教学的第一次,值得同行们试一试。做法如下:

1)           看视频前按学号约5-6人一组;指定执笔人和主持人

2)           指定写作的框架结构

3)           先放北大视频,再放yale,后放电视台评论 (提点:观看视频时适当做点笔记)

4)           分组动笔,时间约20分钟。

 

  同学们呈现的笔头作品大大超过我的预期,下一步希翼同学们口头能有较大突破。

 

(登出英语文章略有修改)谢谢关注

                                           2012-8-25

 

 

 

 

 

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文章录入:麦艳文    

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