2012二模英语优秀作文选登

2012广州高考二模英语优秀作文选登

 

叶雨翘(高三 914

(二模考试中总分126 = 78+15+14+19不含口语;并列全市第二

  As a mayor, I’ll keep concentrating on the sustainable development of our city. Firstly, I”ll improve the public transportation system and make it more comfortable and convenient for folks to enjoy their way on the road. Secondly, the economy will develop at a high speed and more jobs will be accessible to our citizens. What’s more, I promise to put more money in the education field to provide students with better study circumstances and build up more schools that are of good quality. Last but least, I plan to set up more parks and plant more trees in our city and spare no effort to advocate the great benefits of environmental friendly life.

 

汪凯苓(高三614

As mayor, I will lay great emphasis on the sustainable development of our city. To be  concrete, more finance and effort should be placed on education field, thus raising the schools’ conditions and establishing more excellent schools as well. Besides, public transportation should be improved, which will enable citizens to enjoy a more comfortable and convenient traffic system. Moreover, I will not only accelerate the pace of economic growth but also create more employment opportunities. Last but not the least, in terms of environment, apart from constructing more parks and planting more trees, it’s also necessary to advocate the civilians adopting the green life style.

 

钟玛莉(高三6 13.5

As mayor, I will focus on the sustainable development of our city. To start with, I will aim at improving the public traffic conditions with the purpose of enabling our citizens to enjoy more comfort and convenience when they go out. Plus, to accelerate the economic development, I plan to create more employment opportunities for our citizens. In addition, more money will be spent on education including ameliorating the schools’ conditions, which will meet our expectation to set up more schools with good quality. Lastly, I resolve to advocate the green lives among our citizens as well as construct more parks and plant more trees.

 

程显彬(高三614

As mayor, I will pay much attention to the sustainable development of our city. To start with, proper steps will be taken to ease the traffic pressure, making it more comfortable and convenient for citizens to walk around the city. Moreover, I will spare no effort to speed up the economic development, creating more opportunities for employment. In addition, an increasing proportion of fund will be used in education to not only better the school’s condition but also build more schools of high quality. Last but not the least, I will have more parks built and more trees planted within the city, advocating an environmentally friendly style of living.

 

 程显彬 (高三65+18=23

Children are sent on micro-foreign study tours, expected to both improve their language skills and learn the local culture. However, children seldom study during the tours, which cast doubts on the value of the tours.

As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of the foreign study tours because they provide me with an opportunity to broaden my horizon and have a better understanding of the western culture. Besides, these tours enable me to enrich my knowledge by offering a chance to communicate with local people.

When it comes to foreign study tours, a similar example jumps into my mind. When I was studying in middle school, a friend of mine had the opportunity to participate in a study tour. When she came back, she found no difficulty in studying English, with her mind full of creative ideas. Amazed at her change, I was impressed by the effect of the study tour.

If I were lucky enough to participate in a study tour, I would prefer one that could actually benefit my study while giving me much relaxation and joy.

 

周敏慧 (高三64+18=22

       Increasing numbers parents send children on “micro-foreign study tour”, which aroused debate about its effectiveness and value because many children play instead of studying language and culture.

       I’m an opponent against the viewpoint in the passage. For one thing, Studying abroad enables teenagers to exploit the outside world apart from gaining real insights into ourselves. For another, a period of exposure to exotic cultures serves as an unforgettable memory, which adds to our pleasure ad eases our anxiety resulting from the quickening pace of everyday life.

        It’s no exaggeration to say that I have benefited a lot from studying abroad. Last summer vacation, I signed up for a study tour to several western countries. During the trip, not only did I enjoy myself on the beautiful scenery and spectacular landscape, but also I paid visits to many world-renowned universities. It turned out that my pressure and worries from previous study were eased and my understanding about western culture was enhanced. The value of the trip is beyond doubt, which could not be gained in textbooks.

       If I were offered a chance to study abroad, I would be attracted be to a tour when I could experience unique culture to broaden my horizon.

 

 宋旻恺 (高三54+17=21

Nowadays, many parents send their children to a foreign country for a short time to let them learn more about foreign things. But some parents now think these tours are worthless.

I certainly disapprove of going abroad for such a short time in order to learn about foreign culture or improve language. From my own perspective, spending tremendous amount of money having just a brief visit can do nothing to enrich one’s knowledge.

My sister has a similar experience. Last summer vacation, she headed to New York City to learn the culture of America. In the two-week tour, she was arranged to visit countless     museums, galleries, magnificent architectures, etc. However, when she came back, asked what she had learned or where she had visit, she just said she had learned how large the New York City was!

As for me, I prefer a foreign study lasting at least one year. Although the price of it would be very high, what I believe is that only ample time can guarantee the quality of learning

 

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